A rare opportunity to experience -- in your bank account -- just what a veteran
copywriter can do for profits by force-feeding killer salesmanship into your Website or ad...
"Who Else Is Ready To Have John Carlton Give Your Advertising The Same Personalized
Profit-Boosting Treatment That Has Earned Fortunes For So Many Other Marketers?"
Best part: For a very short time, you can do it
for a fraction of the cost of joining one of John's outrageously-priced "inner circle" mentoring
programs!
It's a seriously limited offer...
so you must hurry...
From: Stan
Dahl
San Francisco,
CA
Hi...
In just a second, I'll show you how to get John Carlton's full, undivided attention...
laser-focused on your Website or ad (and thus your entire business future)...
without having to signup for his high-priced "Launching Pad" mentoring program or plunking down
$2,500 for an hour of his time (the ONLY other way you can get
personalized critiques and consultation like this).
First, however... well, I can't risk letting you
get away without understanding what a freakin' opportunity this is to launch your business
and your bank account into the Big Leagues.
So let's be sure you're clear on what's at stake
here.
I've been doing some research on why John is called
"the most respected and ripped-off copywriter
alive."
I mean, I've known him for a long time, and while I admit
he's been a notoriously-brilliant copywriter for over 20 years... he's still just a goof-ball friend when we hang
out.
So I started rooting through his huge database of
testimonials, to see what was causing the fuss.
Here's a sample of what I
found:
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"Thanks to your critiques, my ad is a BIG winner right off
the bat! It’s pulling over 300% profits
online, in a hotly competitive market. We’re already on the way to seven
figures, minimum." Matt Gallant, Vancouver
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"John's first critique of my copy was a shock -- I thought I was
pretty darned good, but he told me to rip it up and start over from scratch, using his specific
advice. I'm glad I had the sense to listen -- my first year as a rookie freelancer, with John's
advice stinging in my ears, I earned over
$350,000. And this year, I'm
bringing in a cool million." Dr. Harlan Kilstein, millionaire freelance
copywriter
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"John, ever since we met a few years ago my life has completely
changed. If I had to add up the amount of money my company has made directly to what you’ve taught
me I'd say it's somewhere in the neighborhood of 4
million dollars, maybe more. What can I say other than thanks a million and I owe
you BIG time." Lou Vukas, Internet marketer
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"I implemented your recommendations, and almost
DOUBLED my conversion rate on
my website! Awesome." Blair Gorman, New Zealand
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"Your headline suggestion for one of my web sites
boosted sales by
70%! This equals an extra $3,000 every month... from one simple change.
Thanks." Terry Dean, Internet Marketing Coach, New Castle, IN
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"Thanks to your specific tips, I just doubled response on my website! I’ve never
gotten 5 hot sales leads in one and a half hours before, such I just did this afternoon. This is
getting really exciting, fast." Perry Marshall, Perry Marshall and
Associates
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I've listed more to the right of this short letter. It's like an endless
stream of people calling, emailing and stopping John at seminars to lavish praise on him...
specific praise, too.
Because his advice has changed their
lives.
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Gary Halbert, Copywriting Legend, Says:
"John is the
first guy I call when I have a marketing problem. His insights and marketing prowess
are unparalleled among the working advertising experts I know... and I know them all. The money
available, when you learn what insiders like John has to share, is just insane. In my book, there
is John... and no one else is even close." Gary Halbert, The Gary Halbert
Letter
50% More Orders
"My average order is 50%
higher (and more) since I adopted your idea.
I love your outlook, and your advice cracks me up while bringing
in the results." Tom Venuto, NJ
Tripled Response!
"You know that new ‘hook’ you
insisted I try in my sales pitch? It tripled response! This translates
into several hundred thousand dollars in sales over the coming year. You
are on my Christmas gift list for life, dude." Lisa Wagner,
California
Just
One Tip Multiplied Response
"Using just ONE tip John gave us
increased our mail response by 32%. This means an additional $2,000 in profit
for every thousand letters sent out." Chris Rabalais, New Millennium
Publications
First
Profits Paid For The New Car
"After reading your course, I
edited my control mailing piece using your ‘Action Verbs’. This killer strategy ALONE
allowed me to buy a new car (for cash) after the first mailing!" Dr. G.E. Nielsen,
Wisconsin
Doubled Response
"You inspired me to write a new pitch to my house list... and it generated a near-DOUBLE response
rate (over 203 requests in under 24 hours, at $495 a pop). Sold out the show. Over all, your course
paid for itself times 9." Ken Calhoun, Daytrading University
"Carlton Pisses Me
Off"
"Carlton really pisses me off. I collect his ads whenever I can, as professional research on great
copy. Trouble is, after reading his stuff, I end up buying what’s he’s selling. He is one amazing
writer. Believe what he tells you." Jeff Paul, best-selling author and
entrepreneurial guru
Dan Kennedy
Says:
"John Carlton is a copywriter I would hire, and there are damn few of those. Further, I would pay
to be in a room to learn from him, and there are even fewer people on that list." Dan
Kennedy, "The No B.S. Marketing Newsletter"
Created Millions In
Profit
"John has created millions in profit for us. We pitted his ads and letters against
big-city ad agencies, PR firms, and writers with lots of awards... and John slaughtered them all.
He consistently hits ‘home runs’ for us -- a 20-to-1 return in profit in not unusual. He has saved
our butts on several occasions." Robert Pierce, president, Tactical Response
Solutions
Massive Breakthrough Generates
$70,000
"I had a massive breakthrough reading your stuff, John. Over the last 14 days, what you
taught me generated an extra $20,979 in sales! Thanks again."
Jeff Gardner, TX (Update: "After a full month, my take is now $70,000! Note to
self: Follow John’s advice!")
"I Stalk Your
Ads"
"Dear John: Your strategies have made me hundreds of thousands of dollars. I
consider your copywriting to be so influential on my success, that I’ve literally stalked your ads
and sales letters, purchased countless products and services to get on lists... solely so I could
collect (and study) the sales letters that you write. This practice has been like a real-world
‘Harvard Business School’ education for me. And I know dozens of millionaire business people and
successful ‘guru’s’ that quietly keep an eye on you, follow all that you do, and consider you a
major influence on their success." Ben Cummings, Park Place Publishing,
NY
"You've Helped My Ads Get
Wicked-Good"
"Phenomenal content. Of all the marketing, advertising and copywriting experts I pay attention to,
John Carlton is by far the most articulate and passionate and knowledgeable (and funny). I
get more value just from your hilarious, ballsy stories alone than from the serious efforts of most
other gurus. Man, you’ve helped my advertising get wicked-good." Joe
Polish, Piranha Marketing
Rodale Books Manager
Says:
"John fought hard to get us to mail his sales letter for our new book.
He ruffled so many feathers pushing us past our creative ‘comfort zone’ that he got himself
temporarily blacklisted... until, of course, his piece not only knocked off one of our top
writers, but also mailed profitably for over 4 years to millions of names."
Sindy Berner, Production Marketing Manager, Rodale Books, PA
Forget College -- Study John's
Advice
"What I learned in an afternoon from John allowed me to earn more money than did my entire
college education. I can’t tell you how dramatically this has changed my life! My
ads now cook and pull like crazy." James Curley, CA
"Worked So Good It Was
Scary!"
"Just finished a 1,000 trial mailing with new copy using Carlton’s
concepts. Raked in $22,000 the first week. It worked so good it was
scary."
Dr. John M. La Tourrette, OR
Extra 69% In
Response
"Thanks to your course, my sales letters are now getting an extra 69% increase in
response! And my print ads are suddenly stratospheric (and highly acclaimed). You
are a friggin’ international superstar." Steve King, London, UK
Copywriting Legend Gary Bencivenga
Says:
"If you enter the marketing jungle in search of riches and respect, just be sure you walk with this
man at your side. John is a recognized master of the world's most effective, ultimate
street-fighter marketing techniques. Do it right, as he shows, and for every $1 you put into your
marketing machine, you can get $2, $3, even $5 or more back. Once you own such a money machine,
your life will be
sweeter than anything you've known." Gary Bencivenga, Hall of Fame copywriter for
Boardroom, Agora, Phillips, and Rodale.
Pure Gold
"I’ve written pieces that have pulled in millions of dollars. Yet, when I sit down to write copy,
I pull out my swipe file of John Carlton’s stuff, and study it like my life depended on
it. He is one of the few true experts in advertising. Pure gold." Caleb
O’Dowd, Florida
"I Eat Salesmen For
Lunch"
"I have 20 years of experience with B2B direct response -- I eat
salesmen for lunch -- so I bristled at John’s suggestion that I needed to rewrite my sales
letter. Good thing I got over my rage... because listening to John allowed me to penetrate over
10% of a very competitive industry, and I’m still getting 2-3 calls a week. Thanks for
pushing me so hard." Dan Page
John Helped Me Dominate An Entire
Asian Market
"Studying John Carlton’s writing, and adapting it to Japanese
culture, has allowed me to dominate an entire Asian market. It’s just
unbelievable what you can do when you learn what’s in John’s amazing bag of tricks."
Markus Kuroda, Japan
From $500 To Over $2,000 A
Month
"I went from making about $500 a month from my website... to pulling
down over $2,000 each month. And it’s all because of your advice on my
copy. Nothing else changed." Fernando Cruz
Even Works With
Romance
"Heck, I even use the stuff you teach to date gorgeous women from Swedish online dating sites.
Works like a charm." Krister Maxe, Sweden
Making Crime Pay
"Who says crime doesn’t pay? John let me steal one of his headlines for a seminar pitch...
netting me a cool $251,771 in just 3 days. If you want ‘good’ copy, you can go
anywhere for advice. But if you want GREAT copy, you’d be nuts not to see what John offers. I don’t
know ANY decent copywriter who would be caught dead without John’s materials close by."
Craig Forte, Forte Communications, Inc.
One Line Of Copy Worth
Millions
"One line of copywriting advice you shared at a seminar I attended
was the gold KEY that helped me launch my latest -- and most successful, to the tune of
millions -- series of Internet marketing seminars. My ad crashed through the noise
of a very crowded market and took me from zero to amazing profit, fast." Ken
McCarthy, Internet marketing wizard, creator of "The System"
Success Roadmap
"Thanks again for providing such a clear roadmap for success. I’m now faced with more opportunity
than I’ve ever dreamed of, and more money than I’ve ever made. You gave me the
impetus to act." John Patten
Forced Needed
Change
"I came to you to learn some tricks about writing killer ads... and I
got more than I expected. The tricks are great... but the reason I’m now a fan for life is
because you also forced me to change the way I look at money, people, risk, problems,
and life. You are the complete package." Scott Palangi
"The Most Powerful Business
Encounter Of My Life"
"No B.S., John -- meeting you, and getting your advice, has been the most powerful business
encounter of my life. I appreciate it." Paul Roberts
Catapulted From Rookie To
Master
"In just 18 months, I’ve catapulted from a ‘wet behind the ears’ novice sraping $300 a job, to
raking $5,500-to-$6,500 upfront per client... plus royalties! I’m now a top copywriter, working for
the UK’s biggest direct mailers, thanks to John’s pure-gold advice. He is the ultimate ‘shock and
awe’ marketing expert." Nick Wrathall, London
Like Buying Dollars For
Pennies
"Getting your material is like buying dollars for pennies. Your stuff
is a proven ‘can’t lose’ system for success, and I go to it first when I need a quick,
proven solution to any problem." Peter Stone, copywriter
Your Specific Advice TRIPLED My
ROI
"The most recent ad you critiqued for me -- and I changed, according to your specific advice --
allowed me to triple my return-on-investment. It’s the best response I’ve ever gotten from
advertising. You’ve opened up a brave new world for me, and I’m grateful." Dr. Robert
McDermott
Best Advice Of All
Gurus
"I’m on the third round of reading your material, and I must say it’s
just by far the best and most helpful I’ve ever seen. And I’ve been exposed to
the best -- including Ted Nicholas, Dan Kennedy, Joe Sugarman, and Jay Abraham. None provided
the quality of content that is so easy to learn, as you." Tony Zito, New
Orleans
Profits Through The
Roof
"I used Carlton’s tactics in my advertising online, and profits went
through the roof. That meant we could move into a bigger house, and I’ve kit it out with most
amazing high-tech gear. I would not be here today without John’s help."
Chris Payne, UK
Huge
Difference
"You’ve made a huge difference in my life. Thanks." Bill
Heid
Just Can't Accept John's Free Advice
-- Here's The Cash
"I have attached $116.06 to the top of this letter -- the
cost of the free newsletters you sent me as a bonus when I signed up for your stuff. I just got
too much out of your advice to accept it free. What you wrote hit me hard, and helped me change
the way I work. I just had to let you know you’re making a huge difference." Lucas
Jaten, Arizona
Quitting My Day
Job
"Two months ago I had little hope of making it in this business. Now, after taking John’s specific
advice, I’m quitting my day job and doing this full time." April Morelock,
Indiana
Thanks For Helping The 'Little
Guy'
"My first letter using your advice drew in $35,000 from a list
of just 10,000. Thanks for taking the time to critique the letter of a ‘little guy’."
Eric Jensen, San Diego
Couldn't Find This Info Anywhere
Else
"This is the exact information I wanted, but couldn’t find anywhere else! You covered
everything the other guru’s neglect. I’m keeping your stuff close by." Wendy
Baldwin
Overnight Success
"This guy turned our business around literally overnight. Just John’s
consulting abilities alone are worth his outrageous fee -- the fact you also get one of the best
copywriters alive makes him the biggest bargain in business today. He throws himself into every
aspect of a project... so when the ad runs and the phones start ringing, you’re prepared to capture
every dollar." Dr. Russell Horine, NuLife Clinics
Earned Us A
Fortune
"He’s earned us a fortune. Killer
copywriter, easily the most exciting and effective I’ve ever dealt with. He’s utterly fearless
in meeting challenges and creating successful ads in one of the toughest markets in the world."
Dr. Michael O’Leary, president, OHP Golf, Inc.
Full Of Desire
"I study
Carlton’s copy like a 14 year-old boy reads Playboy. Completely dazzled,
entranced and full of desire. I’ve read hundreds of books on marketing and copywriting and make
my living with it... so I know how to separate the wheat from the chaff in this business. Every
time I think I’ve hit the nail on the head with my copy, I read one of John’s letters and
realize how much father I could go. Ouch... it hurts to say that... but it’s true."
Michael Jans, President of Insurance Profit Systems, Inc.
Successfully Stolen From
John
"Early in my career, I had the good fortune to discover John
Carlton -- and he deserves much of the credit for my success as a freelancer. I hereby confess
that many of the ideas behind the million-dollar controls I’ve written can be directly
traced to what I learned or stole from John." David Deutsch,
world-class freelancer with controls for Boardroom, Phillips Publishing and other major league
mailers
Put Me Down For Everything You
Have
"Best course on copywriting I’ve ever listened to. Put me down to buy everything you have -- just
charge my card and get it all to me right away. In fact, I like this course so much, I want to let
everyone I do business with know about it, too. It’s that good." Ron LeGrand,
world-famous real estate & marketing guru
Life-Changing Info Worth A
Fortune
"This revolutionized my advertising, and created amazing new profit.
Most direct marketers know about John Carlton and what he can do. In fact, I have shamelessly
ripped off his copy and headlines for years. I’d pay ten times what he’s asking for this course
and still be happy. This info will change your life." Craig
Forte, Forte Communications, Inc.
Boardroom Says:
"Great
copywriters are proven because consumers vote with their money. That’s why guys like John are so
expensive, and so valuable. This is seriously important information for your
business. There are only a handful of writers in John’s league. I read this book
as soon as I got my hands on it." Ken Glickman, Boardroom, Inc., one of the
largest mailers in the world
Quadrupled Results, Allowed Me To Quit My Cushy
Job
"Our investment education business went from $50k a year in sales to over $200k in six
months, thanks to John Carlton (and a hot webmaster from Houston). Thanks to what
I’ve learned, I’m quitting my cushy six-figure a year job to go full-time in this new business!"
Daryl Thompson, TX
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And most of the time...
all it took was one of John's intense, profit-punching
critiques.
The list of people who have paid big bucks to get critiques from
John reads like a Who's Who of direct response marketing... and
past-and-current Insiders include such notables as Rich Schefren,
Frank Kern, Bill Glazer, Ted Thomas, Mark Joyner, Yanik Silver, Terry Dean, Ken Calhoun, Michel Fortin and many,
many more.
I "get it" now.
John's critiques have been the "missing link" to earning a fortune for an ARMY of
marketers, both online and offline. (Even legendary copywriter Gary Halbert said "When I
need to brainstorm the big marketing problems, I call John first.")
It's one thing to know how to write
world-class copy for a client. (And John is one of the most sought-after -- and highest-priced -- pro writers in
advertising.)
But it's a
whole other skill to be able to take someone else's ad... "break it down" to its most critical
elements...
And Then Tell
You Exactly What To Do
To Make That Ad Kick Some
Serious Butt In Your Market!
If your ad sucks... this kind of
"professional intervention" can change your entire life literally overnight.
And if your ad is only pulling "heartbreak"
results -- meaning, for every dollar you bring in, you just KNOW you're
leaving another five or ten or hundred dollars on the table because you're not
maximizing your sales -- then what John can do for you in a short critique will make
your little heart leap for joy.
Get straight on this fact of business
life: Your
business won't take off until you get your advertising powered up with the tested copy tactics and
"classic" salesmanship that only a proven pro can personally reveal to you.
Even experienced marketers often get by on ads that barely
register with readers (and thus never come close to earning what they should).
If you even suspect your
current ad or Website is screwed up, then...
Your ad copy is your salesman. All alone, without you there to help out, your
copy must deliver your entire sales message... in a way that CONNECTS with your reader.
If he isn't reading your
copy, he sure isn't buying, either.
You can have the best product or service in the history of civilization...
but if your advertising isn't getting read (and acted on), then you're toast.
And get clear on this, too: You can read every course and book on advertising out there, and attend every
seminar offered... and you STILL won't burst through to the land of the Big Bucks...
Until You Get Some Personal
Mentoring
By A Top Pro.
Because your situation is ALWAYS
different than the situations in the books and courses and seminars.
It could take you a marketing lifetime to figure out what
you're doing wrong, on your own. (Most never do.)
Or, it could take you twenty minutes... with a little hard-core
personalized mentoring from a pro like John.
This is what he does. His main gig for over two decades has been to write
killer ad copy for some of the largest mailers in the universe (like Rodale, Agora,
Phillips and Boardroom) and many of the most outrageously-successful
entrepreneurs both online and offline.
And, for the last five years, he's been
teaching people all the secrets of successful ad writing. He has earned his reputation,
marketer-by-marketer...
As The Most Brutal, Knowledgeable
And Effective
Teacher With The Chops To Help You Make Your Ads
As Dangerously-Profitable As Humanly
Possible!
The "brutal" part is what sets John apart from
every other guru out there -- he KNOWS what is needed in an ad or Website to make it pull as many sales as
possible.
Because he's been DOING it for twenty years with client after client.
And that means he isn't "nice" when he does critiques of ads...
because there's money on the line. This is
serious stuff -- and NOT the time for "nice try" pats on the back.
No. John treats YOUR copy, during a critique, the exact same way he treats
his OWN.
And he is vicious with himself. Again, because there is money
on the line.
WARNING!
So, before we go any
further... let me WARN
you: If you're too sensitive for an honest
"reality check" of
your copy and salesmanship from a grizzled, no-nonsense professional... then John's not your boy.
This is advice
and very critical deconstruction of your efforts by someone who knows what it takes to win big in the crowded markets out
there.
This is for grown-ups only.
Top marketers -- the ones who have broken the code on writing killer copy
that sells like crazy -- often spend weeks going over every word of their sales pitch, every angle of their
offer, every detail that matters.
And that's why so many of the
BEST marketers today have jumped at the opportunity to have John critique their ads.
Because, after 20-plus years in the front-line trenches of the advertising
world -- both offline and online -- he can tell you at a GLANCE what you're doing wrong... and how to
FIX it.
Having access to John's genius is like finding a bridge that takes you from
the Lost Island Of Clueless Copy... straight over to the Mainland Of Shocking-Good Results.
That's why the list of testimonials here is so long and rabid.
That's why people continue to search John out whenever they absolutely,
positively need their copy to work.
So...
What's all this got to do
with YOU?
Just this...
John's found the perfect way to deliver his critiques to you.
Back in the old days, he did all his critiques
in writing. This was moderately efficient, but made a lot of marketers very, very happy. When you got an
email from John with a critique of your ad included... your life changed forever.
However... John does a lot of seminars, too. And for decades, he's done
something called a "Hot Seat" with people... where he
verbally deconstructs their ads and marketing tactics, right there on stage.
He also does private, personal consultations by phone.
And he'll sit with a client at the computer and just go over a Website right
then and there.
And what he discovered was this: By critiquing your ad
verbally -- while both of you are looking at it -- he can actually cram MORE insight, advice and specific tactics into each critique
session.
He writes fast.
But he speaks even faster -- there is, I swear, a direct
connection between his mouth and that huge "bag of tricks" inside his brain that allows every relevant brilliant
concept and idea to just flood out, uncensored.
This "show and tell" method of giving ad critiques instantly multiplies the amount of advice and tactics he
can share.
With this technology... you'll be looking at your ad or Website on your computer, and you'll HEAR John
talking directly at you... giving you a focused, specific, and almost ridiculously-detailed critique.
It's exactly like those famous transformational
Hot Seats he does in person. Except you get to experience it
all at your leisure, at home, with your computer.
And -- huge bonus -- you can rewind and hear the
tasty parts over and over again.
It's simply the BEST way to learn.
This is very cool.
Your own personalized profit-boosting critique... with total visual AND
verbal involvement.
Ain't technology great?
This is an opportunity for you to get
your own private, personal Hot Seat critique with the most
acclaimed and sought-after world-class copywriter alive. The guy they're raving about in all these
testimonials.
And...
You Can Get Your Personal Critique
For Chump Change!
Right now, a month in the "Be John's Best Friend" mentoring program will cost you $10,000.
Or, you can schedule a 1-hour private phone consultation with John for
$2500.
Or, you can hire him outright to write your ad FOR you -- if he isn't booked
tight, which he usually is -- for $35,000. For a single ad.
And that's the only way you can get a personalized critique right now.
(Occasionally, John has offered very special deals that include one critique... but only to select audiences,
and only in very controlled ways.)
That makes this special offer here the most outrageous bargain in marketing
today.
John is calling this new "see and hear" copy review...
Your 9-Point "Personalized
Profit-Pump" Critique.
Nice name. (I tried, to no avail, to talk him into just calling it a "sales
copy check up".)
Whatever you want to call it... this opportunity can change your life, overnight, if you rely on ad copy for
income.
Here are the 9 points covered:
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Your target market. Are you SURE you know who
you're after? How does your ad and product stack up against the competition, in your
prospect's mind? Most marketers stumble badly by not properly understanding the audience
they're after. John has written for just about every market in the universe... and he's learned how to
break the code of reaching the hottest and most profitable core of almost every one.
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Your prospect's "Psychological Profile". What keeps your reader awake at night?
And knowing that, are you hitting his "emotional sweet spot"
with your sales message? This is the heart of world-class copywriting... and
having a pro like John steer you in the right direction can transform your copy instantly.
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Your USP. Are you positioning yourself in your
market to SELL? (Most marketers bungle this critical step.) A common blunder is to get
confused about what you're actually selling. It's often NOT the nuts and bolts of your
product or service... but rather the benefits those nuts and bolts offer. Huge
difference... and finally "getting" this critical point can turn a lame ad into a profitably dangerous
money-maker.
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Your headline. This is where your reader will decide -- in a BLINK -- whether to stay
and continue reading, or leave and go back to surfing for your competition's ads. The best marketers in the world still screw their headlines up
occasionally... and that's what keeps them coming back to John for tune-ups and vicious
critiques.
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Your opening paragraph. A great product, a great looking ad or Website, and even a
great headline will all go to naught... unless you know how to capitalize on your advantages when you
start writing the "meat" of your copy.
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Your "Copy Mojo". Even writers who devour every book on advertising that gets
published can miss the boat when it comes down to having the right "voice" in your copy.
Most rookies bore the heck out of their readers, going off on tangents and having trouble getting to
any point at all... and that will KILL
sales. Only a grizzled, super-experienced professional can set you right on this advanced (but
easy, once you see how it's done) tactic.
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Your bullets. At some point, almost every ad has to lay it all out there for the
reader... and the easiest way to do this is through bullet-writing. (Even if you don't
use the classic form of bullets or numbers, as I have here.) The crux of persuading your prospect into buying will be in
the tease and "take away" skills you exhibit here.
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Your offer. Most marketers freak out when it comes time to ask for the
order, and try to "sell from their heels". Just curing yourself
of this bad habit will boost profits through the roof. John can deliver the remedy in seconds,
too.
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Your "Greased Slide". Finally, a good critique will address your basic salesmanship chops -- your ability to craft a sales pitch
that takes your reader on a wild ride that doesn't end until, exhausted, he has ordered and given you
money. John will make sure you understand how credibility, proof, and persuasion work in
great sales copy.
There's more, of course.
It's all part of the standard "Hot
Seat" style of critique John has been delivering to paying clients for years.
It's the heart of ALL the testimonials you see
here, too.
So here's what I have for
you: you can submit ANY ad or
Website for the full treatment...
... for only $799.
Remember -- the "Be John's Best Friend"
mentoring program is $10,000)... private consultation is $2,500 an hour... and hiring John to write copy runs to
$35,000 for a single ad (and he's not taking on any clients right now).
He gets these outrageous prices... because what he offers
results in increased profits and a more efficient marketing machine.
What you pay is an investment in your own bank account.
Now, let's get straight on this opportunity: John will
not rewrite your ad for you. (Though he often does deliver great copy while he's critiquing, and often gives
specific examples of phrases, text or headlines.)
This is not about having a sought-after pro
write fresh copy for you for cheap.
No. This is about learning how to write your OWN copy... at a
world-class level.
John will critique your copy the same way he
critiques his OWN. The same way he critiques his Insiders' ads. And the same way he critiques his famous
colleagues' copy (like Gary Halbert, Harlan Kilstein, Rich Schefren and others).
This is about having a proven pro
tell you the TRUTH about the quality of your advertising and marketing efforts.
And give you specific advice on how to make
it killer.
Are you in?
You better
hurry.
Once John has mastered this new "critique delivery system", he plans to shut
this offer down forever.
So don't screw around, if you realize what a screaming deal this is.
To get going right now, just
hit this link button below.
This will take you to the order page, where I'll tell you
how to get your ad, Website (or any other copy or sales letter you want critiqued) put in front of John as soon
as possible.
You do NOT need to have
finished copy, or a working Website to take advantage of this. Many top marketers send
John manuscripts long before anything gets posted or published... so they can get on the right track, avoid
blunders, and use every advantage John can show them to stack the profit-deck in their favor from the
get-go.
It's your choice: Website, Print ad, Yellow Page ad,
auto-responder series, Adword campaign, direct mail letter, sales script for salesmen, or raw manuscript.
Any piece of copy you use to bring in the bacon... John will critique for
you.
Now, I can't tell you exactly when John will call this off...
I'm assuming you've been an avid reader of John's blog, and checked out the free issues of
the Rant he's posted.
So you're "initiated" into the world John thrives in -- serious, no-holds-barred, "down and dirty" marketing. The kind that
works in every market, against every kind of competition, for every kind of product or service.
This is where the Big Boys play, and where the Big Bucks are made in piles that will make
your wildest dreams come true.
I will also...
Personally Guarantee
Your Satisfaction.
With one, simple, very
reasonable caveat: You must show me that you at least tested John’s suggestions and advice.
John bends over backward
to deliver value in every critique he does. Often, just his first glance at your copy will highlight
problems with your hook, your offer, your positioning in the market, or your entire sales
angle.
He also gives very specific
tactical and strategic advice - exactly what he would tell a high-paying client whose entire marketing efforts
rested on what John proposed. (This specificity is what generates all those breathless testimonials you’ve been
reading here - because once you have a proven veteran like John point you in the right direction, life gets very
exciting, very quickly.)
So here’s your guarantee: If, after applying John’s
advice, you aren’t happy... just shoot me an email at myccc{-at-}CarltonCopyCritiques.com, and write a short
paragraph explaining what you did, and the results. Include a link to your new site, or paste in the
revised copy. You have to show me you at least gave John's input a try.
That’s it. I only want to know that you at least attempted to implement the tactics and
advice John gave you.
And if you’re not happy with your new results, I insist you
ask for a refund. I will process your request and promptly return 100% of your money. And we’ll still be
friends.
So ALL the risk is on us. A guarantee like this would ruin
me, of course, if I wasn’t absolutely confident about John’s astonishingly long track record of delivering the
goods here.
This kind of spot-on critique by a grizzled, no-nonsense pro
like John can turn your world around, overnight.
His favorite line is: "Life gets really exciting when your marketing starts to
work."
It’s your call now.
It's a fabulous opportunity.
Don't wait.
Sincerely,
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